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Front Page Feedback

Points made about the front page:

  • The fonts must be in more drastically different sizes to convey the importance.

  • The masthead is too close to the top of the page, needs to be more central.

  •  The photograph is effective as it immerses the reader.

  • The cover lines must be closer to the edge, using a thiner invisible boarder.

  • The bottom of the page is too crowded, something needs to be removed like the banner.

  • The font is in all capitals, there is too much which is standing out on the page.

  • The name of the icon is too small, the caption 'the truth' must be smaller.

  • The price and issue number must be more prominent on the page.

  • The masthead must be more prominent.

  •  The colour scheme of the magaine is not very effective.

  • There must be a strapline.

  • There are not enough fonts on the page.

  • The text 'the truth' makes the magazine seem too much like a gossip magaine, consider using a music related quote from the article.

 

Contents Page Feedback

Points made about the contents page:

  • There must be more images on the page.

  • Bottom left hand space could be filled.

  • Subheadings stand out clearly, as does the text in red.

  • The house style is maintained well.

  • The smoke background is effective due to it being carried accross behind the text saying 'contents'

  • The text 'contents' is not clear enough.

  • The text in the upper right hand side needs to be larger and clearer.

  • The masthead is not clear enough.

  • The posters need to be clearer in addition to the banner labeling them being unclear.

  • The banner's satin finish makes the text difficult to read.

 

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